My Student's work....
To the assignement that the student has to write a letter describing the experience in the woods where you got lost during the school trip.
This is one of my students, Wern wrote. Here it goes...and well...errr..rr..
Dear Out,
Hi, how was the trip? I write this letter to thak you for leaving me behind in the woods. YOu will not believe what I had experienced.
Did you remember that I told you to wait for me when I was using the toilet? When I got out from the toilet, I felt veru frustrated to see none of you around. I had to walk alone in the darkness but there was no sign of any living things around. I didn't even have a torch. I had just a pocket knife to survive in this journey. Fortunately, I had learnt thatt the moss grows in the east so I knew immediately where the exit was. Before I reached the exit, I met a lot of different dead creatures such as a dead rhino, a lion head and etc. I felt miserable and I didn't know what would happen if I was not so brave enough to walk past.
I had such an unforgetable experience. I can't wait to see you at the school. We shall see.
Best Wishes,
Wern
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Do you think this is the result of playing a computer game too much?!
This is one of my students, Wern wrote. Here it goes...and well...errr..rr..
Dear Out,
Hi, how was the trip? I write this letter to thak you for leaving me behind in the woods. YOu will not believe what I had experienced.
Did you remember that I told you to wait for me when I was using the toilet? When I got out from the toilet, I felt veru frustrated to see none of you around. I had to walk alone in the darkness but there was no sign of any living things around. I didn't even have a torch. I had just a pocket knife to survive in this journey. Fortunately, I had learnt thatt the moss grows in the east so I knew immediately where the exit was. Before I reached the exit, I met a lot of different dead creatures such as a dead rhino, a lion head and etc. I felt miserable and I didn't know what would happen if I was not so brave enough to walk past.
I had such an unforgetable experience. I can't wait to see you at the school. We shall see.
Best Wishes,
Wern
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Do you think this is the result of playing a computer game too much?!

